nice one
Reminds me of dimrains new song a bit, "inferno". I didn't like his, but this one sounds good. Ooh I cant tell exactly but thats like 190-200 bpm isnt it lol. Nice melodys, nice synth guitar, a nice distinct beat (you coulda changed it up a bit) and a constant high energy. As Maestro mentioned, the saw tooth was a bit loud but good quality otherwise. I think I hear a koto in the intro... it seems ethnic instruments are popular these days ;)
the bpm I think was like 190.. I didn't really like inferno that much either, it lacked a bit of fine polishing. The beat in this and Midnight is really boring, I can see what you mean. I get distracted with writing the melodies that I forget to change up the drums. :P
arr matey. ty for the review. :)
~cornandbeans
Nice goa
There were alot of places where you should of changed the melody, and shouldn't have. It was still good goa tho
Im still fairly new. :P
chords
It needed chords, not acid but a synth. Also a steady trance beat somewhere later on to really pick it up. Everything you had; the pattern, the beat, were all done really well. Kinda has a japanese hint to it, like my new song. Good work on this 5/5, 10/10. Maybe check my page out
g-R
hmmm, yeah it really does need chords. It seems a bit plain, as does ninjitsu. They have no real "backbone" to them... Mostly just melodies and a bass line. Thanks for the review, it means a lot coming from you xD, as I am one of your fans.
awesome
Simply a beautiful, moving piece of artwork. It has a nice flare, and the quality was perfect. You've impressed me immensely. Good work
g-R
Really?
I honestly think it isnt that good.
im dead
Well a fitting title... probably could of been more diverse, but I liked that reveerb effect. The ocean sound effect worked too... kinda sounded eery until the bongo came in. Neat song, you probably should of added more to it tho.
Yep. But I still like it the way it sounds though. Thanks for the review! 11/07
ugh half asleep
This isnt helping my stay awake =/ I have a tip you should try for your next song. One your finished with your song play it on headphones with really loud volume... you should be able to pick up sharp frequencys easily, then just equalize it. A pretty, dreamy song that makes me fall asleep. You probably could of done more with this song, but it was still nice. As I suggested above, there were several parts in your song that had high treble, I recommend you take a look into that. Good song, ima go sleep now.
Hahaha, nice, maybe as soon as I finish this dumb trance mix of Pachabel's Canon, this is really annoying : |
-Thanks for teh review!
I reviewed this a while ago
My review dissapeared probably tho lol. Watch the panning, I got distortion in my left ear and I dont think whole synths should be kept at the left side. Woot for the kettle! Good drums although I think the distortion kick should be changed a bit later on, as it gets repetitive. The ending is a bit too long.. and the song could have been a bit longer (im only saying this to clarify one of the reviews you got already). Other then it seeming a tad empty in a few places and the panning, I'd say your good to go.
Clear for launch!!!
w00t, I'll have you help me with my song, I'm not sure how to adjust certain things yet, so maybe you'll be able to help : P
-Thanks again!!!
-SuperDrummer146-
lol
That was interesting.. haven't spoken to you for a while. You seem to be improving, thats good. Only suggestion I have is equalize it better, and work on the distortion a bit. Its too crazy for any other advice.. lol.
yea! im BACK .. hadent chek on enwgrounds fora while sup mann! equalize? hmmm didint understand ur question there but thxn for the tip! XD
sweet
Lots of cool wooshing synths lol. I think you needed a funky bass and bassline to go along with it tho. I think the synths were overdone a bit, I had a hard time picking up the melody/rythme. Nice work seperating the stereo field/panning everything, it made it considerably phat. Next time just lay off the sound effects synths a little more and try and make a more distinct melody. 5/5 10/10
Funky bass, there's an idea! I know what you mean, I kind of like throwing everything into a kind of swirling whirlpool, but point taken, a distinctive melody IS really important!
Thanks for the input :)
I make goa now. I don't care about any melodys or any other shit, I only care about goa. So if you don't like goa, stop visiting my music page LOL
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