not bad
You had some good synths going, you need something steady tho. The beat was random and so was the melody. I suggest one kick every 4 notes, with a clap going every 8 notes. Work on the melodys, you get better with practice. Go check out my music if you'd like a good example
Nice goa
There were alot of places where you should of changed the melody, and shouldn't have. It was still good goa tho
Im still fairly new. :P
chords
It needed chords, not acid but a synth. Also a steady trance beat somewhere later on to really pick it up. Everything you had; the pattern, the beat, were all done really well. Kinda has a japanese hint to it, like my new song. Good work on this 5/5, 10/10. Maybe check my page out
g-R
hmmm, yeah it really does need chords. It seems a bit plain, as does ninjitsu. They have no real "backbone" to them... Mostly just melodies and a bass line. Thanks for the review, it means a lot coming from you xD, as I am one of your fans.
awesome
Simply a beautiful, moving piece of artwork. It has a nice flare, and the quality was perfect. You've impressed me immensely. Good work
g-R
Really?
I honestly think it isnt that good.
not bad
The drum part took alot away from the song... the synths and the frequent changing was pretty good, although I think you strayed a little far from the main tetris melody near the end. This was epic indeed, therefore it should be under trance, not techno. The kick could of been louder in some places and the quality could of used some work. All that aside, everything you did melodically and the large amount of synths you used, were amazing. With a bit of polishing, you could of made this alot better. What you have is a very impressive song tho, good work on it. Go check out some of my songs
g-R
I like it
The kick was a bit weak which was good, but you shouldnt stop and start the hats up like that. The synths were cool, very spacey and ambient like. The bass added a sort of funk to it, which nicely complimented the beat. Other then the quality and the diversity, id say this is really good.
im dead
Well a fitting title... probably could of been more diverse, but I liked that reveerb effect. The ocean sound effect worked too... kinda sounded eery until the bongo came in. Neat song, you probably should of added more to it tho.
Yep. But I still like it the way it sounds though. Thanks for the review! 11/07
ugh half asleep
This isnt helping my stay awake =/ I have a tip you should try for your next song. One your finished with your song play it on headphones with really loud volume... you should be able to pick up sharp frequencys easily, then just equalize it. A pretty, dreamy song that makes me fall asleep. You probably could of done more with this song, but it was still nice. As I suggested above, there were several parts in your song that had high treble, I recommend you take a look into that. Good song, ima go sleep now.
Hahaha, nice, maybe as soon as I finish this dumb trance mix of Pachabel's Canon, this is really annoying : |
-Thanks for teh review!
I reviewed this a while ago
My review dissapeared probably tho lol. Watch the panning, I got distortion in my left ear and I dont think whole synths should be kept at the left side. Woot for the kettle! Good drums although I think the distortion kick should be changed a bit later on, as it gets repetitive. The ending is a bit too long.. and the song could have been a bit longer (im only saying this to clarify one of the reviews you got already). Other then it seeming a tad empty in a few places and the panning, I'd say your good to go.
Clear for launch!!!
w00t, I'll have you help me with my song, I'm not sure how to adjust certain things yet, so maybe you'll be able to help : P
-Thanks again!!!
-SuperDrummer146-
I make goa now. I don't care about any melodys or any other shit, I only care about goa. So if you don't like goa, stop visiting my music page LOL
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