hmm
I listened to it a few times to try and figure out what you did here. Like quality wise, etc.. I think you played with the decimal too much, if thats what im hearing. It made a good intro, but you overdid it I think. Good classic cheesy epic melody, it was too short tho. Extend the chorus, lessen the effects and work on the mastering. Very good trance even tho its not all that original.